[NRO-IANAXFER] Final call for comments closed Re: Internet Number Community IANA Stewardship Proposal: Final Call for Comments

[Seun Ojedeji]

Thanks for the update Izumi... big thank you to the entire crisp team also

Regards

sent from Google nexus 4
kindly excuse brevity and typos.
On 13 Jan 2015 03:32, "Izumi Okutani" <izumi at nic.ad.jp> wrote:

> Dear Colleagues,
>
>
> Thank you for all the inputs you have given to the second draft of our
> proposal.
>
>
> The CRISP Team now has moved into developing our proposal to be
> submitted to the ICG on 15th Jan based on the comments received before
> 12 Jan 2015, 23:59 UTC.
>
>
>
> Best Regards,
> Izumi Okutani
> The CRISP Team
>
> On 2015/01/13 2:57, Izumi Okutani wrote:
> > Dear Colleagues,
> >
> >
> > This is a reminder that the CRISP Team will close to receive all
> > comments for the second draft of our proposal as of :
> >
> >>      Second draft comments close         : 12 Jan 2015, 23:59 UTC
> >
> >
> > Please send in all your comments before the above time, for the CRISP
> > Team to consider your input in developing the final proopsal to be
> > submitted to the ICG.
> >
> >
> > Thank you to those who have expressed and shared your comments on this
> > list already.
> >
> >
> > Best Regards,
> > Izumi Okutani
> > The CRISP Team
> >
> >
> > On 2015/01/09 1:21, Izumi Okutani wrote:
> >> Dear colleagues,
> >>
> >>
> >> Please find the second draft of the Internet numbers community's
> >> response to the Request For Proposals issued by the IANA Stewardship
> >> Coordination Group (ICG).
> >>
> >> This draft has been prepared by the Consolidated RIR IANA Stewardship
> >> Proposal (CRISP) Team, with considerations of feedback received from the
> >> global community on <ianaxfer at nro.net> mailing list.
> >>
> >> We have incorporated the following key points in the second draft:
> >>
> >>     - Additional description on contract details, review committee and
> >>       intellectual property rights
> >>     - Description revised on Section V. NITA Requirements and VI.
> >>       Community Process for more clarity
> >>     - No changes are made to key elements of the proposal
> >>
> >> The CRISP Team have considered all comments expressed on
> >> <ianaxfer at nro.net> mailing list before the deadline of 5th Jan 2015,
> and
> >> would now like to make the final call for comments from the global
> >> community on the draft proposal, before submitting to the ICG.
> >>
> >> Second Draft proposal:
> >> ------------------------
> >>    Clean Version  :
> >>    <http://www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-second-draft>
> >>
> >>    Redline Version:
> >>    <http:/www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-second-draft-change-control>
> >>
> >>    The deadline for providing feedback: Mon, 12 January 2015 23:59 UTC
> >>    Feedback should be sent to         : <ianaxfer at nro.net> mailing list
> >>
> >> Community Inputs Considered by the CRISP Team:
> >> ------------------------------------------
> >>    You can check the status of the issues raised by the community and
> >>    proposed the CRISP Team positions at:
> >>
> >>      <http://www.nro.net/crisp-iana-xfer-summary-discussion-08012015>
> >>
> >> Key dates:
> >> -----------
> >>      Second draft to be published        :  8 Jan 2015
> >>      Second draft comments close         : 12 Jan 2015, 23:59 UTC
> >>      Final proposal to be sent to ICG : 15 Jan 2015
> >>
> >> How to Engage in Discussions:
> >> -----------------------------
> >>     All global discussions, for the CRISP team to consider as community
> >>     feedback, will be conducted at <ianaxfer at nro.net> mailing list.
> >>     All the CRISP Team discussions are open to observers.
> >>
> >> Next Step:
> >> -----------
> >>     In developing the final draft based on further feedback, the CRISP
> >>     Team will ensure it has completed considerations of all substantial
> >>     issues raised by the global community, which are compiled in the
> >>     published issues list. The proposal will only incorporate issues
> that
> >>     the CRISP team believes have received consensus support from the
> >>     community.
> >>
> >> References:
> >> ------------
> >> * Discussions by the CRISP Team
> >>       Details of all the CRISP team's work to date, including
> recordings,
> >>       minutes and agendas of all the CRISP Team teleconferences and a
> >>       public archive of the internal CRISP team mailing list, are
> >>       available at:
> >>       https://nro.net/crisp-team
> >>
> >> * Other links:
> >>     - The ICG request for proposals:
> >>      <https://www.icann.org/news/announcement-3-2014-09-03-en>
> >>
> >>     - The IANA Stewardship Transition Discussion in each RIR region:
> >>       <http://www.nro.net/timeline-engagement>
> >>
> >>     - First Draft proposal (Edited version)
> >>       <http://www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-first-draft-1-1>
> >>
> >
>
>
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