[NRO-IANAXFER] Internet Number Community IANA Stewardship Proposal: Final Call for Comments

Pindar Wong pindar.wong at gmail.com
Fri Jan 9 01:37:56 CET 2015


On Fri, Jan 9, 2015 at 8:35 AM, Pindar Wong <pindar.wong at gmail.com> wrote:

> Hi,
>
> Thanks everyone for working on this process and document on such a short
> time frame.
>
> I've read the redline version of the 2nd Draft and agree with it. It's
> better (more detail) than the 1st which I also agree with.
>
> It might be worthwhile considering whether in  II.A.3, last para, to
> provide a data point that over M years there have been N disputes.
>
> Cheers,
>
> p.
>
> PS: As time permits, and before sending it off,  please
>
> 1) Pg 5, para 3, add a space such that 'ASO ACa statement' -> 'ASO AC a
> statement
> '
>
> 2) Double check that all hypertext links work  e.g. Pg 4, ICANN ASO MoU:
> text is fine but looks like it links to
>
> https://www.nro.net/documents/icann-address-supporting-organization-asomou
>

sorry should be

https://www.nro.net/documents/icann-address-supporting-organization-aso-mouNRO


>
> should be (i.e. missing '-')
>

extra (NRO)


>
> https://www.nro.net/documents/icann-address-supporting-organization-aso-mou
>
>
>
> On Fri, Jan 9, 2015 at 3:58 AM, Filiz Yilmaz <koalafil at gmail.com> wrote:
>
>>
>> Dear Izumi and the CRISP Team,
>>
>> Thank you again for your work on this.
>>
>> I am in full support of this second draft of the proposal.
>>
>>
>> Kind regards,
>> Filiz Yilmaz
>>
>>
>>
>> > On 8 Jan 2015, at 17:21, Izumi Okutani <izumi at nic.ad.jp> wrote:
>> >
>> > Dear colleagues,
>> >
>> >
>> > Please find the second draft of the Internet numbers community's
>> > response to the Request For Proposals issued by the IANA Stewardship
>> > Coordination Group (ICG).
>> >
>> > This draft has been prepared by the Consolidated RIR IANA Stewardship
>> > Proposal (CRISP) Team, with considerations of feedback received from the
>> > global community on <ianaxfer at nro.net> mailing list.
>> >
>> > We have incorporated the following key points in the second draft:
>> >
>> >  - Additional description on contract details, review committee and
>> >    intellectual property rights
>> >  - Description revised on Section V. NITA Requirements and VI.
>> >    Community Process for more clarity
>> >  - No changes are made to key elements of the proposal
>> >
>> > The CRISP Team have considered all comments expressed on
>> > <ianaxfer at nro.net> mailing list before the deadline of 5th Jan 2015,
>> and
>> > would now like to make the final call for comments from the global
>> > community on the draft proposal, before submitting to the ICG.
>> >
>> > Second Draft proposal:
>> > ------------------------
>> > Clean Version  :
>> > <http://www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-second-draft>
>> >
>> > Redline Version:
>> > <http:/www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-second-draft-change-control>
>> >
>> > The deadline for providing feedback: Mon, 12 January 2015 23:59 UTC
>> > Feedback should be sent to         : <ianaxfer at nro.net> mailing list
>> >
>> > Community Inputs Considered by the CRISP Team:
>> > ------------------------------------------
>> > You can check the status of the issues raised by the community and
>> > proposed the CRISP Team positions at:
>> >
>> >   <http://www.nro.net/crisp-iana-xfer-summary-discussion-08012015>
>> >
>> > Key dates:
>> > -----------
>> >   Second draft to be published        :  8 Jan 2015
>> >   Second draft comments close        : 12 Jan 2015, 23:59 UTC
>> >   Final proposal to be sent to ICG : 15 Jan 2015
>> >
>> > How to Engage in Discussions:
>> > -----------------------------
>> >  All global discussions, for the CRISP team to consider as community
>> >  feedback, will be conducted at <ianaxfer at nro.net> mailing list.
>> >  All the CRISP Team discussions are open to observers.
>> >
>> > Next Step:
>> > -----------
>> >  In developing the final draft based on further feedback, the CRISP
>> >  Team will ensure it has completed considerations of all substantial
>> >  issues raised by the global community, which are compiled in the
>> >  published issues list. The proposal will only incorporate issues that
>> >  the CRISP team believes have received consensus support from the
>> >  community.
>> >
>> > References:
>> > ------------
>> > * Discussions by the CRISP Team
>> >    Details of all the CRISP team's work to date, including recordings,
>> >    minutes and agendas of all the CRISP Team teleconferences and a
>> >    public archive of the internal CRISP team mailing list, are
>> >    available at:
>> >    https://nro.net/crisp-team
>> >
>> > * Other links:
>> >  - The ICG request for proposals:
>> >   <https://www.icann.org/news/announcement-3-2014-09-03-en>
>> >
>> >  - The IANA Stewardship Transition Discussion in each RIR region:
>> >    <http://www.nro.net/timeline-engagement>
>> >
>> >  - First Draft proposal (Edited version)
>> >    <http://www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-first-draft-1-1>
>> >
>> >
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