[NRO-IANAXFER] Internet Number Community IANA Stewardship Proposal: Final Call for Comments
pindar.wong at gmail.com
Fri Jan 9 01:35:26 CET 2015
Thanks everyone for working on this process and document on such a short
I've read the redline version of the 2nd Draft and agree with it. It's
better (more detail) than the 1st which I also agree with.
It might be worthwhile considering whether in II.A.3, last para, to
provide a data point that over M years there have been N disputes.
PS: As time permits, and before sending it off, please
1) Pg 5, para 3, add a space such that 'ASO ACa statement' -> 'ASO AC a
2) Double check that all hypertext links work e.g. Pg 4, ICANN ASO MoU:
text is fine but looks like it links to
should be (i.e. missing '-')
On Fri, Jan 9, 2015 at 3:58 AM, Filiz Yilmaz <koalafil at gmail.com> wrote:
> Dear Izumi and the CRISP Team,
> Thank you again for your work on this.
> I am in full support of this second draft of the proposal.
> Kind regards,
> Filiz Yilmaz
> > On 8 Jan 2015, at 17:21, Izumi Okutani <izumi at nic.ad.jp> wrote:
> > Dear colleagues,
> > Please find the second draft of the Internet numbers community's
> > response to the Request For Proposals issued by the IANA Stewardship
> > Coordination Group (ICG).
> > This draft has been prepared by the Consolidated RIR IANA Stewardship
> > Proposal (CRISP) Team, with considerations of feedback received from the
> > global community on <ianaxfer at nro.net> mailing list.
> > We have incorporated the following key points in the second draft:
> > - Additional description on contract details, review committee and
> > intellectual property rights
> > - Description revised on Section V. NITA Requirements and VI.
> > Community Process for more clarity
> > - No changes are made to key elements of the proposal
> > The CRISP Team have considered all comments expressed on
> > <ianaxfer at nro.net> mailing list before the deadline of 5th Jan 2015, and
> > would now like to make the final call for comments from the global
> > community on the draft proposal, before submitting to the ICG.
> > Second Draft proposal:
> > ------------------------
> > Clean Version :
> > <http://www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-second-draft>
> > Redline Version:
> > <http:/www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-second-draft-change-control>
> > The deadline for providing feedback: Mon, 12 January 2015 23:59 UTC
> > Feedback should be sent to : <ianaxfer at nro.net> mailing list
> > Community Inputs Considered by the CRISP Team:
> > ------------------------------------------
> > You can check the status of the issues raised by the community and
> > proposed the CRISP Team positions at:
> > <http://www.nro.net/crisp-iana-xfer-summary-discussion-08012015>
> > Key dates:
> > -----------
> > Second draft to be published : 8 Jan 2015
> > Second draft comments close : 12 Jan 2015, 23:59 UTC
> > Final proposal to be sent to ICG : 15 Jan 2015
> > How to Engage in Discussions:
> > -----------------------------
> > All global discussions, for the CRISP team to consider as community
> > feedback, will be conducted at <ianaxfer at nro.net> mailing list.
> > All the CRISP Team discussions are open to observers.
> > Next Step:
> > -----------
> > In developing the final draft based on further feedback, the CRISP
> > Team will ensure it has completed considerations of all substantial
> > issues raised by the global community, which are compiled in the
> > published issues list. The proposal will only incorporate issues that
> > the CRISP team believes have received consensus support from the
> > community.
> > References:
> > ------------
> > * Discussions by the CRISP Team
> > Details of all the CRISP team's work to date, including recordings,
> > minutes and agendas of all the CRISP Team teleconferences and a
> > public archive of the internal CRISP team mailing list, are
> > available at:
> > https://nro.net/crisp-team
> > * Other links:
> > - The ICG request for proposals:
> > <https://www.icann.org/news/announcement-3-2014-09-03-en>
> > - The IANA Stewardship Transition Discussion in each RIR region:
> > <http://www.nro.net/timeline-engagement>
> > - First Draft proposal (Edited version)
> > <http://www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-first-draft-1-1>
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