[NRO-IANAXFER] Internet Number Community IANA Stewardship Proposal: First Draft

Richard Hill rhill at hill-a.ch
Fri Dec 19 09:36:29 CET 2014

Please see embedded comments below.

Thanks and best,

>-----Original Message-----
>From: ianaxfer-bounces at nro.net [mailto:ianaxfer-bounces at nro.net]On Behalf Of Seun Ojedeji
>Sent: vendredi, 19. décembre 2014 07:21
>To: Izumi Okutani
>Cc: ianaxfer at nro.net
>Subject: Re: [NRO-IANAXFER] Internet Number Community IANA Stewardship Proposal: First Draft
>Hello Izumi,
>Thanks for the share, kindly find below a few comments/suggestions (first attempt)
>- The entire first paragraph of section III should be deleted as it does not
> add any more value to the response for that section

I disagree.  That paragraph provides important context for the subsequent paragraphs, so it should be retained.

>- I suggest replacing the word contract in section III with agreement and this
> will also largely require re-wording of 3rd paragraph of section IV

What is being proposed is a contract, so it should be referred to by that word, and not by some other word such as MoU, or SLA, or "agreement" or whatever.  As made clear earlier in the document, the proposed new contract replaces the current IANA Functions contract, so it is indeed a contract.

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