[CRISP-TEAM] Call for volunteer on the SLA analysis

[Izumi Okutani]

Hi Andrei and all,


> Not sure how fresh my eyes are, but I am willing to help here. Do I
> understand correctly that the first draft of the analysis is expected on
> June 3rd?

Excellent Andrei! I think your eyes are fresh in terms of not involved in drafting the SLA text.
Thank you very much for volunteering.

You are correct about the date. 
We expect the analysis to be shared on 3rd June.

> I think we touched on this, but I'd like to make the scope of the review
> and comments more explicit - it is limited to the conformance of the SLA
> to the CRIS Proposal (e.g. we continue not to have opinion about the
> jurisdiction), and purely from the CRISP team perspective.

Yes. We did indeed agree in the past call that our comments will focus on consistency with the numbers proposal.

> To the latter point - we may want to have a stronger community support,
> in this case we should circulate it on ianaxfer earlier and try to
> integrate community feedback in the comments.

Exactly the kind of input I was interested to hear.

This sounds consistent with what we discussed about the CRISP Team role. Is everyone comfortable with that?   

I personally would like to be a little more clear on whether we are incorporating community's comments about the SLA, or we are incorporating comments from the community on the submission from the CRISP Team.
The latter approach makes more sense to me, as unlike the submission to the ICG each community members are able to provide their input directly. 

Please share if anyone has other thoughts.

I agree we should move the timeline of sharing with the ianaxfer list if we seek for comments.


I have redrafted it to prepare the SLA analysis and comment for submission at the same time but it is still very short and tight.

 Fri 21st May UTC13:00	 - Fix volunteer 
 Wed 27th May UTC13:00 	- Interim status update at the CRISP call 
 Wed 3rd Jun           	- Share analysis and draft comment with the CRISP Team 
 Fri 5th Jun           	- Close feedback from the CRISP Team on analysis, draft comments
 Tue  7th Jun          	- Circulate draft comments to the ianaxfer list 
 Thu 9th Jun           	- Close comments from the ianaxfer list.
 Mon 14th Jun UTC13:00 	- Submission to the NRO

Could we move the date of the analysis and comments to, say, Mon 1 June? (The current draft timeline is still based on 3rd June)
I welcome suggestions about the timeline, especially to secure sufficient time to incorporate feedback from the community.


Izumi


On 2015/05/21 18:01, Andrei Robachevsky wrote:
> Hi Izumi, all,
> 
> Izumi Okutani wrote on 21/05/15 02:53:
>> CRISP Team,
>>
>>
>> I would like to call for volunteers on analysis of the SLA to see whether they are consistent with the numbers community proposal.
>>
>>  - One person from RIR legal team: To provide backround on how certain texts were added
>>  - One CRISP member who is not from the legal team: To review the SLA with fresh eyes
> 
> Not sure how fresh my eyes are, but I am willing to help here. Do I
> understand correctly that the first draft of the analysis is expected on
> June 3rd?
> 
> I think we touched on this, but I'd like to make the scope of the review
> and comments more explicit - it is limited to the conformance of the SLA
> to the CRIS Proposal (e.g. we continue not to have opinion about the
> jurisdiction), and purely from the CRISP team perspective.
> 
> To the latter point - we may want to have a stronger community support,
> in this case we should circulate it on ianaxfer earlier and try to
> integrate community feedback in the comments.
> 
> Regards,
> 
> Andrei
> 
>>
>> Based on this analysis, we would like to prepare for comment from the CRISP Team for submission before 14 June, 2015 at 23:59 UTC.
>>
>> This is a suggested timeline. I have not discussed with Nurani and this is just my very prelinary draft for discussions.
>> I welcome comments on the draft timeline as well.
>>
>>   Fri 21st May UTC13:00  Fix volunteer
>>   Wed 27th May UTC13:00  Interim status update at the CRISP call
>>   Wed 3rd  Jun           Share analysis with the CRISP Team
>>   Fri 5th  Jun           Close feedback from the CRISP Team on analysis
>>   Mon 7th  Jun           Draft comments from the CRISP Team based on analysis
>>   Wed 10th Jun           Close comments from the CRISP Team, circulate draft comments to the ianaxfer list
>>   Mon 14th Jun UTC13:00  Submission to the NRO
>>   
>> The current idea of circulating to the ianaxfer list is for transparency, and sharing it a little before the dealine so that the community can see the CRISP team response as a reference for their input.
>> I would be interested to hear any other thoughts on this.
>>
>>  
>> Izumi
>>
>>
>>
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