[CRISP-TEAM] Updated Draft Comment to the CWG Proposal

[Izumi Okutani]

Sent to both the CWG-Stewardship and ianaxfer list.


https://www.nro.net/pipermail/ianaxfer/2015-May/000548.html

Thanks all!

Izumi


On 2015/05/19 4:55, Izumi Okutani wrote:
> Many thanks Michael for incorporating all our comments from Nurani, Andrei and myself.
> 
> Thanks to the CRISP Team members who have expressed comments includig support for the suggested amendments.
> For the record, I support the suggestions made by Nurani and Andrei, which Michael has reflected in the draft.
> 
> So I will wait for the coming 30 min to see if there are any other clarifications and if not, I'll send this out to the CWG-Stewardship.
> 
> 
> 
> Izumi
> 
> 
> On 2015/05/19 4:28, Michael Abejuela wrote:
>> Hello CRISP Team,
>>
>> Attached is the redline and clean version of the final draft for the comments to the CWG-Stewardship. You will observe edits in response to Izumi, Nurani and Andrei���s comments as well as minor grammar and typo fixes.
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>> Thank you to everyone���s quick review and comment since the call. If you have any questions, please let me know.
>>
>> Thanks,
>> -Michael
>>
>>
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>> From: Michael Abejuela <mabejuela at arin.net<mailto:mabejuela at arin.net>>
>> Date: Monday, May 18, 2015 at 1:58 PM
>> To: Michael Abejuela <mabejuela at arin.net<mailto:mabejuela at arin.net>>, "crisp at nro.net<mailto:crisp at nro.net>" <crisp at nro.net<mailto:crisp at nro.net>>
>> Subject: Re: [CRISP-TEAM] Updated Draft Comment to the CWG Proposal
>>
>> Comment from Izumi (remotely):
>>
>> One minor suggestion to amend:
>>
>> "Our input below will focus on stating the position of the Numbers community as found in the Numbers community proposal, seek clarification������
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>> to
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>> "Our input below will focus on stating the positions of the Numbers community as found in the Numbers community proposal, seek clarification���"
>>
>>
>>
>> --
>> Michael R. Abejuela
>> Associate General Counsel
>> ARIN
>> 3635 Concorde Parkway
>> Suite 200
>> Chantilly, VA 20151
>> (703) 227-9875 (p)
>> (703) 263-0111 (f)
>> mabejuela at arin.net<mailto:mabejuela at arin.net>
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>> From: Michael Abejuela <mabejuela at arin.net<mailto:mabejuela at arin.net>>
>> Date: Monday, May 18, 2015 at 12:36 PM
>> To: "crisp at nro.net<mailto:crisp at nro.net>" <crisp at nro.net<mailto:crisp at nro.net>>
>> Subject: [CRISP-TEAM] Updated Draft Comment to the CWG Proposal
>>
>> Hello CRISP Team,
>>
>> As discussed during the CRISP call earlier today, I have compiled the comments received on the draft document in an attempt to harmonize for finalization and sending to the CWG-Stewardship.  You will observe two documents attached.  I took the last redline with comments prior to our call today and accepted all changes.  I then created a redline against that document to show any additional changes I made/suggested which is the redline document attached.  I also created a clean version of the redline document for ease of your reading and review.
>>
>> Please provide any questions, comments, concerns or desired edits at your earliest convenience and no later than 1800 UTC so that I can work with Izumi and Nurani to finalize and have it sent by 1900 UTC to the CWG-Stewardship.
>>
>> Thanks,
>> -Michael
>>
>> --
>> Michael R. Abejuela
>> Associate General Counsel
>> ARIN
>> 3635 Concorde Parkway
>> Suite 200
>> Chantilly, VA 20151
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