[CRISP-TEAM] Updated Draft Comment to the CWG Proposal

[Bill Woodcock]

Agreed. 

    
                -Bill


> On May 18, 2015, at 18:42, Sweeting, John <john.sweeting at twcable.com> wrote:
> 
> I like the rewording, makes it easier to follow for everyone.
> 
> 
>> On 5/18/15, 1:09 PM, "Nurani Nimpuno" <nurani at netnod.se> wrote:
>> 
>> Hi Michael,
>> 
>> Thank you so much for your excellent work.
>> This looks good to me.
>> 
>> Just one quick comment.
>> 
>> When we talk about the Review Committee, in relation to the Review Team,
>> it might be obvious to us what we are referring to, but it might not be
>> to everyone.
>> 
>> Therefore, can I suggest that we reword the paragraph about the Review
>> Committee as follows:
>> 
>>> OLD:
>>> - The Numbers community requires no additional reviews or
>>> organizational structures beyond the Review Committee monitoring the
>>> service levels for the Numbers functions and advising the RIRs
>>> accordingly.
>> 
>> NEW:
>> - The Numbers community requires no additional reviews or organizational
>> structures beyond the Review Committee which is specified in the Numbers
>> community proposal. The Number community's Review Committee is tasked
>> with monitoring the service levels for the Numbers functions and advising
>> the RIRs accordingly.
>> 
>> Other than that, I don't have anything else to add at this point.
>> 
>> Kind regards,
>> 
>> Nurani
> 
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