[CRISP-TEAM] Updated Draft Comment to the CWG Proposal

[Sweeting, John]

I like the rewording, makes it easier to follow for everyone.


On 5/18/15, 1:09 PM, "Nurani Nimpuno" <nurani at netnod.se> wrote:

>Hi Michael,
>
>Thank you so much for your excellent work.
>This looks good to me.
>
>Just one quick comment.
>
>When we talk about the Review Committee, in relation to the Review Team,
>it might be obvious to us what we are referring to, but it might not be
>to everyone.
>
>Therefore, can I suggest that we reword the paragraph about the Review
>Committee as follows:
>
>> OLD:
>> - The Numbers community requires no additional reviews or
>>organizational structures beyond the Review Committee monitoring the
>>service levels for the Numbers functions and advising the RIRs
>>accordingly.
>
>NEW:
>- The Numbers community requires no additional reviews or organizational
>structures beyond the Review Committee which is specified in the Numbers
>community proposal. The Number community's Review Committee is tasked
>with monitoring the service levels for the Numbers functions and advising
>the RIRs accordingly.
>
>Other than that, I don't have anything else to add at this point.
>
>Kind regards,
>
>Nurani
>


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