[CRISP-TEAM] Responses to GAO questions

[Janvier Noulaye]

2015-05-14 12:51 GMT+01:00 Nurani Nimpuno <nurani at netnod.se>:

>
>  Internet Number Resource Policy development
> ​​
> does not take place within the
> ​​
> ICANN community, but within the five separate regions of the RIRs, in a
> bottom-up, open and inclusive manner.
>
​Maybe "ICANN community" inside the first sentence can confuse the
understanding ?​ Maybe  do add one more word:
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​.....
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​does not take place  *straight*  within the​ ​ICANN community​.....


​Regards,
​/Janvier Ngnoulaye​
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