[CRISP-TEAM] CRISP Proposal Slides
robachevsky at isoc.org
Tue Mar 24 13:20:58 CET 2015
Great work, thank you German!
I fully support Nurani's and Izumi's suggestions.
Some additional thoughts.
Slide 4 - I wonder if the accountability arrows should point in the
opposite direction (i.e. accountable to whom)
Slide 5 - "IANA function stability and reliability: ICANN to continue as
the IANA Numbering Services Operator in the immediate term"
I suggest "IANA function stability and reliability: ICANN to continue as
the IANA Numbering Services Operator, orderly transition to another
operator should such need arise"
Slide 6 - "(Absence of) Fee" -> "Cost-based Fee"
Slide 10 - perhaps more affirmative: "Support expressed for the
proposal" and "No objections for the proposal components"
Thank you for putting this together
German Valdez wrote on 23/03/15 16:38:
> It looks like previous file was corrupted.
> I’m attaching a new one
>> On 23 Mar 2015, at 5:28 pm, German Valdez <german at nro.net> wrote:
>> Dear CRISP Team
>> This presentation took more debate and reviews than original expected but as promised I’m attaching this ppt for your review and perusal.
>> Please feel free to add any comments, observation, requests for slides, etc.
>> May I ask for input for this Thursday.
>> Looking forward to receiving your comments
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