[CRISP-TEAM] Draft response for the community review (was: [Reminder: Comment on SLA close today 2nd June ])

[Andrei Robachevsky]

Colleagues,

Please find attached the (final) version of the analysis, incorporating
Izumi's suggestion. I also added a "draft" watermark to make it clear
that we expect community feedback.

Andrei

Izumi Okutani wrote on 03/06/15 11:33:
> On 2015/06/03 18:12, Janvier Noulaye wrote:
>> 2015-06-03 10:03 GMT+01:00 Andrei Robachevsky <robachevsky at isoc.org>:
>>
>>> Hi,
>>> Izumi Okutani wrote on 03/06/15 10:54:
>>>> Yes, I think I am confused about the same part.
>>>
>>> Since this part s confusing, a better approach may be to clearly state
>>> our expectation in the analysis, rather than guessing what the precise
>>> meaning of 12.1.1. could be.
>>>
>>
>> ���Maybe Craig could also more elaborate his statement to clear up the
>> confusion?���
> 
> 
> Yes that would certainly be helpful if Craig (or Michael) could help us in clarifying this point.
> 
> In the interests of time, and sharing with the global list today, in parallel to above, I suggest we still prepare our suggested response based on our interpretation, and make our observation to be conditional based on what we interpret.
> 
> 
> Izumi 
> 
>> ���/Janvier���
>>
>>
>>> How about:
>>>
>>> This principle is adequately addressed in Article 12. In our
>>> understanding this provision covers potential IPRs and trademarks,
>>> excluding the IANA trademark, IANA.ORG and the public registry data. In
>>> our understanding the expected arrangements for these assets will have
>>> happened (i.e. transferred to the IETF Trust and declared as being in
>>> the public domain) before the SLA is signed, and therefore are outside
>>> the scope of this Agreement.
>>>
>>> We also note that such arrangements will need to be documented and
>>> implemented in other agreements between all of the relevant actors
>>> (which include more than the parties to this SLA).
>>>
>>> Andrei
>>>
>>>
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>>
> 
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