[CRISP-TEAM] [NRO-IANAXFER] Call for Comments for a Draft Internet Number Community Review Committee Charter

[Nurani Nimpuno]

Hi Izumi and all,

I think the draft below looks good. Very useful to reference the relevant parts of the proposal too!
Just one minor comment from me below.

> On 6 jul 2015, at 10:59, 奥谷 泉 <izumiokutani at yahoo.co.jp> wrote:
<snip>
> [Section III.A.4. Establishment of a Review Committee  (Description about the Role)]
> The RIRs shall establish a Review Committee that will advise and assist the NRO EC in its periodic review. The Review Committee will, as needed, undertake a review of the level of service received from the IANA Numbering Services Operator and report to the NRO EC any concerns regarding the performance of the IANA Numbering Services Operator, including especially any observed failure or near-failure by the IANA Numbering Services Operator to meet its obligations under the proposed agreement.  Any such Review Committee will advise the NRO EC in its capacity solely to oversee the performance of the IANA Numbering Services, and the Review Committee's advice and comment will be limited to the processes followed in the IANA Numbering Services Operator's performance under the proposed
>  agreement.
>  --> Reflected in "Functions/Objectives" Clauses 1-3.
> As an additional observation, the number community proposal limits the scope of the Review Committee's advice related to the IANA Numbering Services.
> Clause 1 of the charter describes "The	Review Committee’s main function" which may give room for additional functions as needed. 
> We do not observe inconsistencies if  the advice will be around the performance of the IANA functions but may be worth giving more clarity

I agree with this observation. I don’t see any conflicts or inconsistencies with the proposal, but I agree that it could be worded in a clearer manner!

Nurani

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