[CRISP-TEAM] Fwd: [NRO-IANAXFER] Call for Comments for a Draft Internet Number Community Review Committee Charter

[奥谷 泉]

Many thanks Janvier for your comment, to have taken your time to review the Review Committee charter in details.

As in the case with the SLA, the comment from the CRISP Team for the Review Committee charter focuses on whether there are any inconsistencies with the number community proposal.
The reason for this is that the role of the community/the CRISP Team is to develop and the proposal which reflects the consensus of the number community and implementation is left to the RIRs.

We have therefore we intentionally avoided to be too prescriptive in our comments and for the Review Committee. 
The RIRs (NRO) has well established experiences in implementing community based committee such as the ASO AC, the CRISP Team, including developing a charter. I see the same level of details are described for the Review Committee as for the CRISP Team,  so I think we can be comfortable based on the experience that this level of details of the charter work sufficiently well.

I hope this makes sense and please let me know if there is anything further you wish to clarify.
I'd like to share the draft response to the global ianaxfer list as a reference, before submitting to the NRO at UTC13:00.

Thanks again Janvier for your feedback, not just on this but regularly providing comments on the list.


Izumi




----- Original Message -----
>From: Janvier Noulaye <jnoulaye at gmail.com>
>To: Nurani Nimpuno <nurani at netnod.se> 
>Cc: crisp at nro.net
>Date: 2015/7/6, Mon 17:32
>Subject: Re: [CRISP-TEAM] Fwd: [NRO-IANAXFER] Call for Comments for a Draft Internet Number Community Review Committee Charter
> 
>
>Dear Nurani and All,
>Hopefully that this will still helpful at this time. 
>Please see below my inputs. 
> 
>Introduction (This
section to be added at the top of the document)
>This document
establishes the Review Committee (ReCom) of the Internet Number
Community (INC) and provides direction
for its operation, and interaction with the NRO EC and the INC.
> 
>Composition (To
clarify if the term is renewable or not, on point 6)
>6: Each appointment is for a two year term renewable, starting from …
> 
>Proceedings
>To add this paragraph before Paragraph 8:
>On the achievement
of its Objectives the ReCom is sustained by NRO EC commitment of displaying
their greatest efforts for the activities of the ReCom
> 
>To add this sentence at the beginning of Paragraph
10:
>The ReCom shall report to the NRO EC, who shall keep the INC informed
of its activity.
> 
>To add this sentence at the end of Paragraph 10:
>The period of getting this feedback and comments should not
go beyond 30 days .
> 
>To add this sentence as a new paragraph
following the paragraph 16:
>The Chair of ReCom will coordinate a mailing list,
conference call or any related activity, and will be the spokesperson of the team
in front of the NRO EC, or for some cases, in front of the INC.
> 
>Oversight Authority (This
section to be added at the bottom of the document)
>The ReCom is formed under the consensus
of the NRO EC.
>The NRO EC may suggest modification to this charter at any time. 
>
>
>Warm regards,
>/Janvier Ngnoulaye
>
>
>2015-07-03 14:53 GMT+01:00 Nurani Nimpuno <nurani at netnod.se>:
>
>Dear CRISP team,
>>
>>Apologies for this very late mail, that I had the best intentions to send out earlier this week.
>>
>>The deadline for comments on the Review Committee charter is Monday 6 July 2015, 23:59 UTC.
>>
>>The CRISP team has not yet provided any comments. We feel it would be helpful if the CRISP team commented on the charter in terms of its consistency with the number community proposal.
>>
>>Could I therefore ask you to provide your comments on this list before Sunday 23:59 UTC? (Apologies again for the short notice.)
>>
>>Kind regards,
>>
>>Nurani
>>
>>
>>
>>> Begin forwarded message:
>>>
>>> From: German Valdez <german at nro.net>
>>> Subject: [NRO-IANAXFER] Call for Comments for a Draft Internet Number Community Review Committee Charter
>>> Date: 23 juni 2015 06:17:46 CEST
>>> To: <ianaxfer at nro.net>
>>>
>>> Dear Colleagues
>>>
>>> Please refer to the below call for comments published today in the NRO website
>>>
>>> https://www.nro.net/news/call-for-comments-for-a-draft-internet-number-community-review-committee-charter
>>>
>>> Regards
>>>
>>> German Valdez
>>> NRO
>>>
>>>
>>> ====
>>>
>>> NRO – PUBLIC CONSULTATION
>>>
>>> CALL FOR COMMENTS FOR A DRAFT INTERNET COMMUNITY REVIEW COMMITTEE CHARTER
>>>
>>> Open until: 6 July 2015, 23:59 UTC
>>>
>>> On 15 January, 2015, the Consolidated RIR IANA Stewardship Proposal (CRISP) Team submitted the Internet Number Community Proposal to the request for proposals issued by the IANA Stewardship Coordination Group (ICG).
>>>
>>> One of the key elements of the Internet Number Community Proposal, described in section III.A.4, is the establishment of a Review Committee to ensure that the service level defined in the proposed SLA for the IANA Numbering Services is maintained by the IANA Numbering Services Operator.  Further description of the Review of IANA Numbering services is described in Article 8 of the draft SLA.
>>>
>>> All interested parties are now encouraged to review and comment on the draft Internet Number Community Review Committee Charter. The document is available at
>>>
>>> https://www.nro.net/review-committee-charter
>>>
>>> This call for public comments will remain open until 6 July, 2015 at 23:59 UTC.  Comments can be submitted by any interested party to the ianaxfer at nro.net mailing list. Subscription to this list is open and available at:
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