[CRISP-TEAM] Fwd: [NRO-IANAXFER] Call for Comments for a Draft Internet Number Community Review Committee Charter

Mon Jul 6 10:59:22 CEST 2015

Hi Nurani and the CRISP Team,

Thanks Nurani for confirming comments from the CRISP Team on the Review Committee Charter.I agree with your observations.
Thanks also to Mwendwa for expressing your agreement - it's helpful to know.

I added analysis in comparison with the our proposal to back up our observation.  I'd like so suggest to send this out at UTC23:00 6th July.

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Dear NRO EC,

The CRISP Team would like thank the NRO for this opportunity to comment on  the draft Internet Number Community Review Committee Charter.

We observes no inconsistencies with the numbers community proposal Section "III.A.4. Establishment of a Review Committee".
We believe this process of publishing the draft for comment ensures that the implementation of the proposal is consistent with the consensus of the number community, and appreciate that RIRs, jointly as the NRO have published the draft for community feedback.
[Section III.A.4. Establishment of a Review Committee (Description about the Role)]

The RIRs shall establish a Review Committee that will advise and assist the NRO EC in its periodic review. The Review Committee will, as needed, undertake a review of the level of service received from the IANA Numbering Services Operator and report to the NRO EC any concerns regarding the performance of the IANA Numbering Services Operator, including especially any observed failure or near-failure by the IANA Numbering Services Operator to meet its obligations under the proposed agreement.  Any such Review Committee will advise the NRO EC in its capacity solely to oversee the performance of the IANA Numbering Services, and the Review Committee's advice and comment will be limited to the processes followed in the IANA Numbering Services Operator's performance under the proposed agreement.
--> Reflected in "Functions/Objectives" Clauses 1-3.
As an additional observation, the number community proposal limits the scope of the Review Committee's advice related to the IANA Numbering Services.
Clause 1 of the charter describes "The	Review Committee’s main function" which may give room for additional functions as needed. 
We do not observe inconsistencies if  the advice will be around the performance of the IANA functions but may be worth giving more clarity
[Section III.A.4. Establishment of a Review Committee: (Description about Transparency)]
Activities of the Review Committee shall be conducted in an open and transparent manner. Reports from the Review Committee shall be published.
--> Reflected in "Proceedings" Clauses 8 and 10, "Transparency" Clauses 11-13.
[Section III.A.4. Establishment of a Review Committee:(Description about Composition)]
The Review Committee should be a team composed of suitably qualified Internet Number Community representatives from each RIR region. The selection of the Review Committee members should be conducted in an open, transparent, and bottom-up manner appropriate for each RIR region. There should be equal representation from each RIR region within the Review Committee.
 --> Reflected in "Composition" Clauses 4 and 5.

With this draft charter of the Review Committee published, as well the first draft of the SLA text which has closed its public comments on 14th June,  the CRISP Team has confident on the smooth preparation of implementation of the Number Community proposal in timely manner.

----- Original Message -----
>From: Nurani Nimpuno <nurani at netnod.se>
>To: "crisp at nro.net" <crisp at nro.net> 
>Date: 2015/7/6, Mon 03:36
>Subject: Re: [CRISP-TEAM] Fwd: [NRO-IANAXFER] Call for Comments for a Draft Internet Number Community Review Committee Charter
> 
>Hi all,
>
>Just for the record, I cannot find anything in the proposed charter that is inconsistent  with, or conflicting with the Number community proposal. 
>
>If anyone else feels differently, please express that on this list. 
>
>Kind regards,
>Nurani
>
>
>
>
>> On 3 jul 2015, at 15:53, Nurani Nimpuno <nurani at netnod.se> wrote:
>> 
>> Dear CRISP team,
>> 
>> Apologies for this very late mail, that I had the best intentions to send out earlier this week. 
>> 
>> The deadline for comments on
 the Review Committee charter is Monday 6 July 2015, 23:59 UTC.
>> 
>> The CRISP team has not yet provided any comments. We feel it would be helpful if the CRISP team commented on the charter in terms of its consistency with the number community proposal.
>> 
>> Could I therefore ask you to provide your comments on this list before Sunday 23:59 UTC? (Apologies again for the short notice.) 
>> 
>> Kind regards,
>> 
>> Nurani
>> 
>> 
>> 
>>> Begin forwarded message:
>>> 
>>> From: German Valdez <german at nro.net>
>>> Subject: [NRO-IANAXFER] Call for Comments for a Draft Internet Number Community Review Committee Charter
>>> Date: 23 juni 2015 06:17:46 CEST
>>> To: <ianaxfer at nro.net>
>>> 
>>> Dear Colleagues
>>> 
>>> Please refer to the below call for comments published today in the NRO website
>>> 
>>> https://www.nro.net/news/call-for-comments-for-a-draft-internet-number-community-review-committee-charter
>>> 
>>> Regards
>>> 
>>> German Valdez
>>> NRO
>>> 
>>> 
>>> ====
>>> 
>>> NRO – PUBLIC CONSULTATION
>>> 
>>> CALL FOR COMMENTS FOR A DRAFT INTERNET COMMUNITY REVIEW COMMITTEE CHARTER
>>> 
>>> Open until: 6 July 2015, 23:59 UTC
>>> 
>>> On 15 January, 2015, the Consolidated RIR IANA Stewardship Proposal (CRISP) Team submitted the Internet Number Community Proposal to the request
 for proposals issued by the IANA Stewardship Coordination Group (ICG).
>>> 
>>> One of the key elements of the Internet Number Community Proposal, described in section III.A.4, is the establishment of a Review Committee to ensure that the service level defined in the proposed SLA for the IANA Numbering Services is maintained by the IANA Numbering Services Operator.  Further description of the Review of IANA Numbering services is described in Article 8 of the draft SLA.
>>> 
>>> All interested parties are now encouraged to review and comment on the draft Internet Number Community Review Committee Charter. The document is available at
>>> 
>>> https://www.nro.net/review-committee-charter
>>> 
>>> This call for public comments will remain open until 6 July, 2015 at 23:59 UTC.  Comments can be submitted by any
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