[CRISP-TEAM] NRO CRISP Website: to reflect the lates staus

[Izumi Okutani]

On 2015/01/21 17:44, Alan Barrett wrote:
> On Wed, 21 Jan 2015, Izumi Okutani wrote:
>> Since we have now closed comments for our proposal, I feel it's useful
>> for the NRO CRISP Team website to reflect this.
> 
> Yes!
> 
>>    1. "Final Proposal" to come before "Participation and CRISP
>>         Mailing Lists" Section
>>
>>         - People would to now confirm the final proposal as the
>>           comment period is already over
>>         - add text and html versions (as requested seperately)
> 
> I agree with that.
> 
> Could we also make the URL <https://www.nro.net/crisp-final-proposal> go 
> to a landing page where people may choose the TXT, HTML, or PDF 
> version.  It currently redirects to the PDF version.

Perhaps we want to make this consistent with links for the first and
second drafts?

We now have all of these links go to the PDF version and we provide
seperate links for text and html.

 e.g.
 https://www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-first-draft
 http://www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-second-draft

I don't have strong preference about the landing page as long as it's
consistent with the past two drafts.

>>     2. Important Dates
> 
>>        NEW:
>>        "Key Dates before the submission to the ICG "
>>        First draft published: 19 Dec 2014
>>        First draft comments close: 5 Jan 2015
>>        Second draft to be published: 8 Jan 2015
>>        Second draft comments close: 12 Jan 2015
>>        Final proposal to be sent to ICG: 15 Jan 2015
> 
> Since the actions were all performed in the past, we should change "to 
> be published" or "to be sent" to "published" or "sent".
> 

Good point.


Izumi