[CRISP-TEAM] Fwd: Re: Interim version, not yet checked visually in Word...

Michael Abejuela mabejuela at arin.net
Thu Jan 15 23:16:26 CET 2015

Thank you Alan,

In the interim of waiting for others feedback, I am moving forward on the
touch ups - pagination, formatting such as page breaks, removing grey
boxing, making sure hyperlinks work (some were not active), spacing, font,

To be clear, at this point absolutely no textual changes are being made
anywhere unless directed by the group through some objection to the last
draft I circulated or unless clearly a typo/misspelling, etc.

I look forward to everyone’s endorsement/comments for finalization.


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On 1/15/15, 5:10 PM, "Alan Barrett" <apb at cequrux.com> wrote:

>On Thu, 15 Jan 2015, Michael Abejuela wrote:
>>Just as a quick update as I¹m editing. So far I¹ve done the following:
>>(1)	Incorporated redline edits from Nurani/Paul¹s document minus the
>>change to II.A.3;
>>(2)	II.A.3 has been edited per Alan¹s suggested text;
>>(3)	I¹ve also included the edits referenced in Alan¹s e-mail;
>>(4)	I¹ve removed the version control section; and
>>(5)	I¹ve removed the letter from the file and put it into a separate
>Thank you.
>I have checked the changes between version 7 and version 9, and
>also between version 8 and version 9.  I am satisfied that all the
>changes make sense.  I have not checked the changes between the
>previously published draft 2 and the latest version 9, because
>there are too many changes, and they were checked earlier while we
>were producing versions 5 and 7.
>I have also checked that the changes requested (relative to
>version 8) have been applied to version 9.
>> Have I missed anything else that anyone can think of? If not,
>> I will take this file and clean it up with pagination and any
>> last minute formatting (i.e. Removing gray box in the principles
>> section, page breaks, etc.). So final call on edits?
>I think it's ready for final touch-up.  I can think of the following
>things to do or check:
>* remove the blank page that appears as page 1.
>* check for bad page breaks, such as where a heading is at the bollom of
>a page.
>* update the table of contents.
>--apb (Alan Barrett)

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