[CRISP-TEAM] Fwd: Re: Interim version, not yet checked visually in Word...
apb at cequrux.com
Thu Jan 15 23:10:07 CET 2015
On Thu, 15 Jan 2015, Michael Abejuela wrote:
>Just as a quick update as I¹m editing. So far I¹ve done the following:
>(1) Incorporated redline edits from Nurani/Paul¹s document minus the
>change to II.A.3;
>(2) II.A.3 has been edited per Alan¹s suggested text;
>(3) I¹ve also included the edits referenced in Alan¹s e-mail;
>(4) I¹ve removed the version control section; and
>(5) I¹ve removed the letter from the file and put it into a separate file.
I have checked the changes between version 7 and version 9, and
also between version 8 and version 9. I am satisfied that all the
changes make sense. I have not checked the changes between the
previously published draft 2 and the latest version 9, because
there are too many changes, and they were checked earlier while we
were producing versions 5 and 7.
I have also checked that the changes requested (relative to
version 8) have been applied to version 9.
> Have I missed anything else that anyone can think of? If not,
> I will take this file and clean it up with pagination and any
> last minute formatting (i.e. Removing gray box in the principles
> section, page breaks, etc.). So final call on edits?
I think it's ready for final touch-up. I can think of the following
things to do or check:
* remove the blank page that appears as page 1.
* check for bad page breaks, such as where a heading is at the bollom of
* update the table of contents.
--apb (Alan Barrett)
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