[CRISP-TEAM] Comment deadline UTC2030 e: Version 8 clean and redline

[Izumi Okutani]

On 2015/01/16 5:42, Izumi Okutani wrote:
> On 2015/01/16 5:39, Alan Barrett wrote:
>> On Fri, 16 Jan 2015, Izumi Okutani wrote:
>>> On 2015/01/16 5:03, Alan Barrett wrote:
>>>> III.A.3.  says "the NTIA has no oversight role in IANA Numbering
>>>> Services".  Is that accurate?  The previous vesion qualified it as no
>>>> oversight role "in policy-making", not no oversight role at all.  I
>>>> don't know the answer.
>>>
>>> Alan, I had the same question and was wondering where this changes is
>>> coming from.
>>>
>>> It is talking about policy and I suggest bring the change back.
>>
>> It's a substantive change that was not discussed.  I think we should
>> reinstate the "in policy making" phrase.  The entire sentence would become:
>>
>>      The ASO MoU is an agreement between the Internet Number Community
>> and ICANN; the NTIA has no oversight role in policy-making for    IANA
>> Numbering Services, and its transition out of its current    role would
>> have no effect on the policy-making framework.
>>
> 
> Nurani just sent a text and hope that works for you as well.
> 

OK so go with Alan's version.

Izumi