[CRISP-TEAM] Comment deadline UTC2030 e: Version 8 clean and redline

[Izumi Okutani]

On 2015/01/16 5:39, Alan Barrett wrote:
> On Fri, 16 Jan 2015, Izumi Okutani wrote:
>> On 2015/01/16 5:03, Alan Barrett wrote:
>>> III.A.3.  says "the NTIA has no oversight role in IANA Numbering
>>> Services".  Is that accurate?  The previous vesion qualified it as no
>>> oversight role "in policy-making", not no oversight role at all.  I
>>> don't know the answer.
>>
>> Alan, I had the same question and was wondering where this changes is
>> coming from.
>>
>> It is talking about policy and I suggest bring the change back.
> 
> It's a substantive change that was not discussed.  I think we should 
> reinstate the "in policy making" phrase.  The entire sentence would become:
> 
>     The ASO MoU is an agreement between the Internet Number Community    
> and ICANN; the NTIA has no oversight role in policy-making for    IANA 
> Numbering Services, and its transition out of its current    role would 
> have no effect on the policy-making framework.
> 

Nurani just sent a text and hope that works for you as well.


izumi