[CRISP-TEAM] Comment deadline UTC2030 e: Version 8 clean and redline

[Alan Barrett]

On Fri, 16 Jan 2015, Izumi Okutani wrote:
>On 2015/01/16 5:03, Alan Barrett wrote:
>> III.A.3.  says "the NTIA has no oversight role in IANA Numbering
>> Services".  Is that accurate?  The previous vesion qualified it as no
>> oversight role "in policy-making", not no oversight role at all.  I
>> don't know the answer.
>
>Alan, I had the same question and was wondering where this changes is
>coming from.
>
>It is talking about policy and I suggest bring the change back.

It's a substantive change that was not discussed.  I think we 
should reinstate the "in policy making" phrase.  The entire 
sentence would become:

    The ASO MoU is an agreement between the Internet Number Community 
    and ICANN; the NTIA has no oversight role in policy-making for 
    IANA Numbering Services, and its transition out of its current 
    role would have no effect on the policy-making framework.