[CRISP-TEAM] Fwd: Re: Interim version, not yet checked visually in Word...

[Alan Barrett]

On Thu, 15 Jan 2015, Michael Abejuela wrote:
>Please forward any detailed concerns and edits to the list as soon as
>possible, and I will work to incorporate. I will try to make my speed
>skills with Word useful today! :-)

I sent my detailed comments half an hour ago, see
thie email message:

    Date: Thu, 15 Jan 2015 22:03:56 +0200
    From: Alan Barrett <apb at cequrux.com>
    To: Izumi Okutani <izumi at nic.ad.jp>
    Cc: crisp at nro.net
    Subject: Re: [CRISP-TEAM] Comment deadline UTC2030 e: Version 8 clean
        and redline

Apaet from the few issues mentioned there, all my suggestions were 
either incorporated, or replaced by something at least as good, or 
are too trivial to worry about.

--apb (Alan Barrett)