[CRISP-TEAM] Fwd: Re: Interim version, not yet checked visually in Word...

[Alan Barrett]

On Thu, 15 Jan 2015, Paul Rendek wrote:
> I sent these two docs in today and I ahd support for the changes 
> and they are not in the 7-8 redline doc that was just sent 
> recently by Bill to the list.
>
> A small few are there but not all.

Michael, can you incorporate these changes?

> And the text that I sent comments on to revert back to the text 
> before Bill did this version of the edits was not taken into 
> account.

Paul, could you repeat your sugegstions, giving clear section 
numbers and text?

> I am not pleased with this. The suggestions were clear and took 
> quite sometime to produce. I saw messages of support for them 
> and no objections.

Let's get it fixed.  We have an hour before UTC21:30  NRO Secretariat
post the proposal on NRO website.

--apb (Alan Barrett)