[CRISP-TEAM] Status update

[Izumi Okutani]

On 2015/01/16 3:49, Alan Barrett wrote:
> On Thu, 15 Jan 2015, Bill Woodcock wrote:
>>> On Jan 15, 2015, at 10:23 AM, Izumi Okutani <izumi at nic.ad.jp> wrote:
>>>
>>> It is expected that RIR staff, as the contractual party of this 
>>> agreement, will draft the specific language of this agreement. During 
>>> the drafting process, the RIRs are expected to consult their 
>>> respective RIR communities.  and that tThe drafting process will be 
>>> guided by the principles listed below. References to relevant 
>>> sections of the current NTIA agreement are also noted, as it is 
>>> expected the new agreement will share many of the same contractual 
>>> goals and mechanisms.
>>
> 
>> Okay, is there consensus on the text that Izumi is quoting here, 
>> modulo fixes to the typos?  It clobbers a whole lot of edits that 
>> various of you asked for.  Off the top of my head, I think the most 
>> popular one was the ���expected that RIR staff, as the contractual 
>> party��� being fixed to ���expected that the RIRs, as the contractual 
>> parties���.  As written above, it���s obviously factually incorrect.
> 
> The first line should say "The RIRs".  Otherwise it looks OK.

I copy pasted Michael's redline which is probably why it's here.
Thanks for spotting this Alan!

and thank you for the great summary.


Izumi