[CRISP-TEAM] Status update
izumi at nic.ad.jp
Thu Jan 15 19:50:49 CET 2015
On 2015/01/16 3:49, Alan Barrett wrote:
> On Thu, 15 Jan 2015, Bill Woodcock wrote:
>>> On Jan 15, 2015, at 10:23 AM, Izumi Okutani <izumi at nic.ad.jp> wrote:
>>> It is expected that RIR staff, as the contractual party of this
>>> agreement, will draft the specific language of this agreement. During
>>> the drafting process, the RIRs are expected to consult their
>>> respective RIR communities. and that tThe drafting process will be
>>> guided by the principles listed below. References to relevant
>>> sections of the current NTIA agreement are also noted, as it is
>>> expected the new agreement will share many of the same contractual
>>> goals and mechanisms.
>> Okay, is there consensus on the text that Izumi is quoting here,
>> modulo fixes to the typos? It clobbers a whole lot of edits that
>> various of you asked for. Off the top of my head, I think the most
>> popular one was the ���expected that RIR staff, as the contractual
>> party��� being fixed to ���expected that the RIRs, as the contractual
>> parties���. As written above, it���s obviously factually incorrect.
> The first line should say "The RIRs". Otherwise it looks OK.
I copy pasted Michael's redline which is probably why it's here.
Thanks for spotting this Alan!
and thank you for the great summary.
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