[CRISP-TEAM] Status update
apb at cequrux.com
Thu Jan 15 19:49:19 CET 2015
On Thu, 15 Jan 2015, Bill Woodcock wrote:
>> On Jan 15, 2015, at 10:23 AM, Izumi Okutani <izumi at nic.ad.jp> wrote:
>> It is expected that RIR staff, as the contractual party of
>> this agreement, will draft the specific language of this
>> agreement. During the drafting process, the RIRs are expected
>> to consult their respective RIR communities. and that tThe
>> drafting process will be guided by the principles listed
>> below. References to relevant sections of the current NTIA
>> agreement are also noted, as it is expected the new agreement
>> will share many of the same contractual goals and mechanisms.
> Okay, is there consensus on the text that Izumi is quoting here,
> modulo fixes to the typos? It clobbers a whole lot of edits
> that various of you asked for. Off the top of my head, I think
> the most popular one was the “expected that RIR staff, as
> the contractual party” being fixed to “expected that the
> RIRs, as the contractual parties”. As written above, it’s
> obviously factually incorrect.
The first line should say "The RIRs". Otherwise it looks OK.
--apb (Alan Barrett)
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