[CRISP-TEAM] ver.2 Re: Draft Announcement to IANAXFER : Internet Number Community IANA Stewardship Proposal submitted to the ICG
Andrei Robachevsky
robachevsky at isoc.org
Thu Jan 15 18:38:35 CET 2015
Very good announcement, Izumi. I support.
Andrei
Izumi Okutani wrote on 15/01/15 17:39:
> CRISP Team,
>
>
> This is the updated announcement for IANAXFER list once we have
> submitted the proposal to the ICG.
>
>
> I welcome you comments until UTC18:30.
>
> Izumi
>
>
> --------------------------------------------------------------------------
>
> Dear colleagues,
>
>
> The Consolidated RIR IANA Stewardship Proposal (CRISP) Team is pleased
> to announce that we have submitted the Internet numbers community's
> response to the Request For Proposals issued by the IANA Stewardship
> Coordination Group (ICG).
>
> The CRISP Team have considered all comments expressed on
> <ianaxfer at nro.net> mailing list before the deadline of UTC23:59 12th Jan
> 2015, and have incorporated the following key points in the proposal:
>
> - The Review Committee selection
> Clarified Review Committee selection is expected to be conducted in
> open, bottom up and inclusive manner, with equal representation
> from each RIR region.
>
> - Development of SLA
> Clarified the RIRs are expected to consult the RIR
> communities during the drafting process
>
> - The contract fee
> Clarified the contract fee is based on costs incurred by the IANA
> operator in providing the IANA numbering service.
>
> - Editorial Changes
> All editorial suggestions from community members where consensus was
> confirmed within the CRISP Team to address, and any other changes of
> editorial nature agreed by the CRISP Team
>
> No changes are made to the basic elements of the proposal since the
> second version. All of the above changes were made to provide further
> clarity for the proposed elements.
>
> We have observed several explicit support for our proposal on
> <ianaxfer at nro.net> mailing list and we consider there was consensus from
> the number resource community for our proposal.
>
> We would like to thank all members of the Internet number community, who
> have contributed in this process and have shared your input.
>
> Final Draft proposal:
> ------------------------
> ## URL ##
>
>
> References:
> ------------
> * Discussions by the CRISP Team
> Details of all the CRISP team's work to date, including recordings,
> minutes and agendas of all the CRISP Team teleconferences and a
> public archive of the internal CRISP team mailing list, are
> available at:
> https://nro.net/crisp-team
>
> * Other links:
> - The ICG request for proposals:
> <https://www.icann.org/news/announcement-3-2014-09-03-en>
>
> - The IANA Stewardship Transition Discussion in each RIR region:
> <http://www.nro.net/timeline-engagement>
>
> - Second Draft proposal
> <http://www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-second-draft>
>
> - First Draft proposal (Edited version)
> <http://www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-first-draft-1-1>
>
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>
> On 2015/01/15 12:16, Izumi Okutani wrote:
>> CRISP Team,
>>
>>
>> Please find below the draft annoucement to be sent to the IANAXFER list
>> once we have completed the submission to the ICG.
>>
>> One point I would like to particularly draw to you attention and consult
>> is the part which mentions about endorsements and comments from the
>> community for the proposal.
>>
>> According to my memory, this was consensus within the CRISP Team to do
>> this, based on the comment from Andrew Dul, how we measure support for
>> the final proposal.
>>
>> I would like to double check if we are all happy to do this and we want
>> be careful in setting community expectations on this part, not to start
>> whole discusssions about the proposal again, which is not constructive.
>> (and if we agree, do we want to set an indication of the timeline?)
>>
>>
>> Izumi
>>
>> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>> Dear colleagues,
>>
>>
>> We are pleased to announce, the Consolidated RIR IANA Stewardship
>> Proposal (CRISP) Team has submitted the Internet numbers community's
>> response to the Request For Proposals, issued by the IANA Stewardship
>> Coordination Group (ICG).
>>
>> We would like to thank all members of the Internet number community, who
>> have contributed in this process and have shared your input.
>>
>> The CRISP Team have considered all comments expressed on
>> <ianaxfer at nro.net> mailing list before the deadline of UTC23:59 12th Jan
>> 2015, and have incorporated the following key points in the proposal:
>>
>> - The Review Committee selection
>> Clarified Review Committee selection is expected to be conducted in
>> open, bottom up and inclusive manner, with equal representation
>> from each RIR region.
>>
>> - Development of SLA
>> Clarified the RIRs are expected to consult the RIR
>> communities during the drafting process
>>
>> - The contract fee
>> Clarified the contract fee is based on costs incurred by the IANA
>> operator in providing the IANA numbering service.
>>
>> - Editorial Changes
>> All editorial suggestions from community members where consensus was
>> confirmed within the CRISP Team to address, and any other changes of
>> editorial nature agreed by the CRISP Team
>>
>> No changes are made to the basic elements of the proposal and all of he
>> above changes addresses to have further clarity in the proposal elements.
>>
>> While we have completed the submission of the proposal to the ICG, the
>> CRISP Team continues to welcome endorsements and comments from the
>> community for the proposal, as an indication of community support for
>> the final proposal.
>>
>>
>> Final Draft proposal:
>> ------------------------
>> Clean Version :
>> ## URL ##
>>
>> Redline Version:
>> ## URL ##
>>
>> Endorsements/comments for the final proposal:
>> ---------------------------------------------
>> We welcome endorsements/comments from the community for the final
>> proposal at <ianaxfer at nro.net> mailing list.
>>
>> Community Inputs Considered by the CRISP Team:
>> ------------------------------------------
>> You can check the status of the issues raised by the community and
>> proposed the CRISP Team positions at:
>>
>> ## URL ##
>>
>>
>> References:
>> ------------
>> * Discussions by the CRISP Team
>> Details of all the CRISP team's work to date, including recordings,
>> minutes and agendas of all the CRISP Team teleconferences and a
>> public archive of the internal CRISP team mailing list, are
>> available at:
>> https://nro.net/crisp-team
>>
>> * Other links:
>> - The ICG request for proposals:
>> <https://www.icann.org/news/announcement-3-2014-09-03-en>
>>
>> - The IANA Stewardship Transition Discussion in each RIR region:
>> <http://www.nro.net/timeline-engagement>
>>
>> - Second Draft proposal
>> <http://www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-second-draft>
>>
>> - First Draft proposal (Edited version)
>> <http://www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-first-draft-1-1>
>> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>>
>
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