[CRISP-TEAM] ver.2 Re: Draft Announcement to IANAXFER : Internet Number Community IANA Stewardship Proposal submitted to the ICG

[Izumi Okutani]

CRISP Team,


This is the updated announcement for IANAXFER list once we have
submitted the proposal to the ICG.


I welcome you comments until UTC18:30.

Izumi


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Dear colleagues,


The Consolidated RIR IANA Stewardship Proposal (CRISP) Team is pleased
to announce that we have submitted the Internet numbers community's
response to the Request For Proposals issued by the IANA Stewardship
Coordination Group (ICG).

The CRISP Team have considered all comments expressed on
<ianaxfer at nro.net> mailing list before the deadline of UTC23:59 12th Jan
2015, and have incorporated the following key points in the proposal:

 -  The Review Committee selection
    Clarified Review Committee selection is expected to be conducted in
    open, bottom up and inclusive manner, with equal representation
    from each RIR region.

 -  Development of SLA
    Clarified the RIRs are expected to consult the RIR
    communities during the drafting process

 - The contract fee
   Clarified the contract fee is based on costs incurred by the IANA
   operator in providing the IANA numbering service.

 - Editorial Changes
   All editorial suggestions from community members where consensus was
   confirmed within the CRISP Team to address, and any other changes of
   editorial nature agreed by the CRISP Team

No changes are made to the basic elements of the proposal since the
second version. All of the above changes were made to provide further
clarity for the proposed elements.

We have observed several explicit support for our proposal on
<ianaxfer at nro.net> mailing list and we consider there was consensus from
the number resource community for our proposal.

We would like to thank all members of the Internet number community, who
have contributed in this process and have shared your input.

Final Draft proposal:
------------------------
 ## URL ##


References:
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* Discussions by the CRISP Team
    Details of all the CRISP team's work to date, including recordings,
    minutes and agendas of all the CRISP Team teleconferences and a
    public archive of the internal CRISP team mailing list, are
    available at:
    https://nro.net/crisp-team

* Other links:
  - The ICG request for proposals:
   <https://www.icann.org/news/announcement-3-2014-09-03-en>

  - The IANA Stewardship Transition Discussion in each RIR region:
    <http://www.nro.net/timeline-engagement>

  - Second Draft proposal
     <http://www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-second-draft>

  - First Draft proposal (Edited version)
    <http://www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-first-draft-1-1>

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On 2015/01/15 12:16, Izumi Okutani wrote:
> CRISP Team,
> 
> 
> Please find below the draft annoucement to be sent to the IANAXFER list
> once we have completed the submission to the ICG.
> 
> One point I would like to particularly draw to you attention and consult
> is the part which mentions about endorsements and comments from the
> community for the proposal.
> 
> According to my memory, this was consensus within the CRISP Team to do
> this, based on the comment from Andrew Dul, how we measure support for
> the final proposal.
> 
> I would like to double check if we are all happy to do this and we want
> be careful in setting community expectations on this part, not to start
> whole discusssions about the proposal again, which is not constructive.
> (and if we agree, do we want to set an indication of the timeline?)
> 
> 
> Izumi
> 
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> Dear colleagues,
> 
> 
> We are pleased to announce, the Consolidated RIR IANA Stewardship
> Proposal (CRISP) Team has submitted the Internet numbers community's
> response to the Request For Proposals, issued by the IANA Stewardship
> Coordination Group (ICG).
> 
> We would like to thank all members of the Internet number community, who
> have contributed in this process and have shared your input.
> 
> The CRISP Team have considered all comments expressed on
> <ianaxfer at nro.net> mailing list before the deadline of UTC23:59 12th Jan
> 2015, and have incorporated the following key points in the proposal:
> 
>   -  The Review Committee selection
>      Clarified Review Committee selection is expected to be conducted in
>      open, bottom up and inclusive manner, with equal representation
>      from each RIR region.
> 
>   -  Development of SLA
>      Clarified the RIRs are expected to consult the RIR
>      communities during the drafting process
> 
>   - The contract fee
>     Clarified the contract fee is based on costs incurred by the IANA
>     operator in providing the IANA numbering service.
> 
>   - Editorial Changes
>     All editorial suggestions from community members where consensus was
>     confirmed within the CRISP Team to address, and any other changes of
>     editorial nature agreed by the CRISP Team
> 
> No changes are made to the basic elements of the proposal and all of he
> above changes addresses to have further clarity in the proposal elements.
> 
> While we have completed the submission of the proposal to the ICG, the
> CRISP Team continues to welcome endorsements and comments from the
> community for the proposal, as an indication of community support for
> the final proposal.
> 
> 
> Final Draft proposal:
> ------------------------
>   Clean Version  :
>   ## URL ##
> 
>   Redline Version:
>   ## URL ##
> 
> Endorsements/comments for the final proposal:
> ---------------------------------------------
> We welcome endorsements/comments from the community for the final
> proposal at <ianaxfer at nro.net> mailing list.
> 
> Community Inputs Considered by the CRISP Team:
> ------------------------------------------
>   You can check the status of the issues raised by the community and
>   proposed the CRISP Team positions at:
> 
>   ## URL ##
> 
> 
> References:
> ------------
> * Discussions by the CRISP Team
>      Details of all the CRISP team's work to date, including recordings,
>      minutes and agendas of all the CRISP Team teleconferences and a
>      public archive of the internal CRISP team mailing list, are
>      available at:
>      https://nro.net/crisp-team
> 
> * Other links:
>    - The ICG request for proposals:
>     <https://www.icann.org/news/announcement-3-2014-09-03-en>
> 
>    - The IANA Stewardship Transition Discussion in each RIR region:
>      <http://www.nro.net/timeline-engagement>
> 
>    - Second Draft proposal
>       <http://www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-second-draft>
> 
>    - First Draft proposal (Edited version)
>      <http://www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-first-draft-1-1>
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>