[CRISP-TEAM] Updated list of edits to be incorporated

[Izumi Okutani]

Bill and CRISP Team,


FYI, these are the list of suggested edits from which needs to be
incorporated in ver.8.

I just added Nurani & Paul's edits from the material used at the 14th call.

Thank you for agreeing to share us the draft before UTC15:30.
It is extremely helpful as we are working under a very tight timeline.

 -  Paul's comments "CRISP Team Proposal-BW5- paul edit.doc"
    [if they have not been incorporated in the latest draft]
 -  Andrei's text suggestion
    "Possible inconsinstency pointed out on IRP for Section III A2 and
     IIIA3"
 -  Alan's comments (CRISP Team Proposal-BW7-apb-notes-4.doc)
 -  Paul and Nurani's comment
 -  Definitions to be added
    "Glossary of Definitions for RFP response" glossary.docx
 - CRISP Team Proposal-BW7-Nurani Paul edits.doc


Thanks,
Izumi