[CRISP-TEAM] Alan Barrett's comments on the BW7 draft.
woody at pch.net
Thu Jan 15 16:48:15 CET 2015
> On Jan 15, 2015, at 7:44 AM, Alan Barrett <apb at cequrux.com> wrote:
> On Thu, 15 Jan 2015, Bill Woodcock wrote:
>>> I haven't changed any typeface or wrapping, and I don't know which of my comments you are talking about.
>> Also the direction of the first tab, for that matter. Which was why I included a screen shot.
> Oh, I didn't see the sceeen shot. I see it now.
> Apaprently, LibreOffice decided that the "Helvetica" font is not available, so it substituted something else and the line wrap changed. I'd like the section to look like this:
> AFRINIC Blah blah blah
> APNIC Blah blah blah
> ARIN Blah blah blah too much to fit on one line
> so it wraps to a second line
> LACNIC Blah blah blah blah
> RIPE NCC Blah blah blah blah
> If you did it some other way deliberately, that's fine. I thought
> that what I saw was a mistake, so I commented on it.
The way you want it is the way it is. That’s why I provide the PDF, so you can all see what stuff actually looks like, regardless of fonts or applications installed on your machine.
> There's a sentence in II.B.3.ii that says "members have the right to
> vote individuals onto the governing board". I suggest to change that to
> "members have the right to elect individuals to the governing board".
> Essentially "vote onto" -> "elect”.
Good catch. Fixed. Thanks.
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