[CRISP-TEAM] Interim version, not yet checked visually in Word...

[Bill Woodcock]

> On Jan 14, 2015, at 11:23 PM, Alan Barrett <apb at cequrux.com> wrote:
> 
> On Thu, 15 Jan 2015, Paul Rendek wrote:
>> Thanks for this. I think this doc. is looking really great. I have a few
>> changes that I have listed in my version.
>> 
>> Please find attached in the doc.
> 
> I agree with all Paul's changes.  Some are important, such as where agreed text had been changed, or where the agreed text had never been incoprorated, and some I don't care about, but I can support all the changes.
> 
> I was distressed to see that some agreed text had been changed, but I am glad that Paul caught it.

There are lots of overlapping changes, where people have agreed upon two different changes that affect the same text, and those changes have to be reconciled somehow.  But that’s a general principle, not a response to Paul, whose comments I haven’t begun to work through yet.

                                -Bill




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