[CRISP-TEAM] Interim version, not yet checked visually in Word...
apb at cequrux.com
Thu Jan 15 13:28:54 CET 2015
On Thu, 15 Jan 2015, Bill Woodcock wrote:
>> I support all Nurani's changes, but in section IV.B, I
>> suggest writing "essentially a Service Level Agreement for
>> the IANA Numbering Services" instead of "essentially an IANA
>> Numbering Services Service Level Agreement". I think that the
>> juxtaposition of "Services" and "Service" makes the sentence
>> dissicult to read.
> Very much agreed. And thank you for the solution. I’ll apply
> it now.
> Oops. We have duplication between III.A.3 and IV.B. I’ve
> resolved in favor of the former.
Please paste the affected text.
--apb (Alan Barrett)
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