[CRISP-TEAM] Interim version, not yet checked visually in Word...

Alan Barrett apb at cequrux.com
Thu Jan 15 13:28:54 CET 2015

On Thu, 15 Jan 2015, Bill Woodcock wrote:
>> I support all Nurani's changes, but in section IV.B, I 
>> suggest writing "essentially a Service Level Agreement for 
>> the IANA Numbering Services" instead of "essentially an IANA 
>> Numbering Services Service Level Agreement".  I think that the 
>> juxtaposition of "Services" and "Service" makes the sentence 
>> dissicult to read.
> Very much agreed.  And thank you for the solution.  I’ll apply 
> it now.
> Oops.  We have duplication between III.A.3 and IV.B.  I’ve 
> resolved in favor of the former.

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--apb (Alan Barrett)

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