[CRISP-TEAM] Interim version, not yet checked visually in Word...

[Bill Woodcock]

> On Jan 15, 2015, at 4:23 AM, Nurani Nimpuno <nurani at netnod.se> wrote:
> 
> 
>> On 15 jan 2015, at 13:06, Alan Barrett <apb at cequrux.com> wrote:
>> 
>>> On Thu, 15 Jan 2015, Nurani Nimpuno wrote:
>>> I have made the changes directly in the document for easier review.
>> 
>> I support all Nurani's changes, but in section IV.B, I suggest writing "essentially a Service Level Agreement for the IANA Numbering Services" instead of "essentially an IANA Numbering Services Service Level Agreement".  I think that the juxtaposition of "Services" and "Service" makes the sentence dissicult to read.
> 
> Agreed. I support Alan's improvement.

Yep, it’s in there.

                                -Bill




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