[CRISP-TEAM] Interim version, not yet checked visually in Word...
apb at cequrux.com
Thu Jan 15 13:06:23 CET 2015
On Thu, 15 Jan 2015, Nurani Nimpuno wrote:
>I have made the changes directly in the document for easier review.
I support all Nurani's changes, but in section IV.B, I suggest
writing "essentially a Service Level Agreement for the IANA
Numbering Services" instead of "essentially an IANA Numbering
Services Service Level Agreement". I think that the juxtaposition
of "Services" and "Service" makes the sentence dissicult to read.
--apb (Alan Barrett)
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