[CRISP-TEAM] Alan Barrett's comments on the BW7 draft.
apb at cequrux.com
Thu Jan 15 12:33:22 CET 2015
On Thu, 15 Jan 2015, Alan Barrett wrote:
> Comments in section I were provided in a separate file, based on
> an earler version of Bill's document, and are not included here.
> I will work to merge the two sets of comments and send a merged
> version later.
Here's the file "CRISP Team Proposal-BW7-apb-notes-4.doc", which
incorporates my comments on the entirety of the BW7 draft. Most
of these comments had previously been shared in other documents,
but now I have combined them into a single document.
There are also some new comments on section I, because my previous
comments hhad been based on the BW5 draft, but the new comments
are based on the BW7 draft.
--apb (Alan Barrett)
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