[CRISP-TEAM] Comments on sections II to VI
apb at cequrux.com
Thu Jan 15 11:42:37 CET 2015
[re-sending with he file attachment this time]
On Thu, 15 Jan 2015, Alan Barrett wrote:
> My earlier comments, in the file "CRISP Team
> Proposal-BW5-apb-notes-1.doc", were based on "CRISP Team Proposal-BW5.doc"
> and were my comments on section I of the document.
> I now attach the file "CRISP Team Proposal-BW7-apb-notes-2.doc", which are
> based on "CRISP Team Proposal-BW7.doc", and are my comments on section II
> of the document, plus a small number of comments on earlier sections.
Here's the file "CRISP Team Proposal-BW7-apb-notes-3.doc", which incorporates
all my comments from "CRISP Team Proposal-BW7-apb-notes-2.doc", plus
additional comments on the remainder of the document. These comments are
based on "CRISP Team Proposal-BW7.doc".
Comments in section I were provided in a separate file, based on an earler
version of Bill's document, and are not included here. I will work to merge
the two sets of comments and send a merged version later.
--apb (Alan Barrett)
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