[CRISP-TEAM] Comments on sections II to VI

[Alan Barrett]

[re-sending with he file attachment this time]

On Thu, 15 Jan 2015, Alan Barrett wrote:
> My earlier comments, in the file "CRISP Team 
> Proposal-BW5-apb-notes-1.doc", were based on "CRISP Team Proposal-BW5.doc" 
> and were my comments on section I of the document.
> 
> I now attach the file "CRISP Team Proposal-BW7-apb-notes-2.doc", which are 
> based on "CRISP Team Proposal-BW7.doc", and are my comments on section II 
> of the document, plus a small number of comments on earlier sections.

Here's the file "CRISP Team Proposal-BW7-apb-notes-3.doc", which incorporates 
all my comments from "CRISP Team Proposal-BW7-apb-notes-2.doc", plus 
additional comments on the remainder of the document.  These comments are 
based on "CRISP Team Proposal-BW7.doc".

Comments in section I were provided in a separate file, based on an earler 
version of Bill's document, and are not included here.  I will work to merge 
the two sets of comments and send a merged version later.

--apb (Alan Barrett)
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