[CRISP-TEAM] Interim version, not yet checked visually in Word...

[Alan Barrett]

On Thu, 15 Jan 2015, Paul Rendek wrote:
>Thanks for this. I think this doc. is looking really great. I have a few
>changes that I have listed in my version.
>
>Please find attached in the doc.

I agree with all Paul's changes.  Some are important, such as 
where agreed text had been changed, or where the agreed text had 
never been incoprorated, and some I don't care about, but I can 
support all the changes.

I was distressed to see that some agreed text had been changed, 
but I am glad that Paul caught it.

--apb (Alan Barrett)