[CRISP-TEAM] Comments closeing UTC6:00 Re: Interim version, not yet checked visually in Word...

[Bill Woodcock]

> On Jan 14, 2015, at 10:35 PM, Bill Woodcock <woody at pch.net> wrote:
> 
>> And we will need more time after Bill has completed his final version.
> 
> I think I’m caught up on all changes I’ve been informed of, less the two of Alan’s that needed text drafted.  I’m attaching a clean copy here, and will try to create a redline next.


…and here’s the redline.  For all the reasons I stated before, I really encourage you all to step back and take a full pass through the whole clean document, though, rather than worrying over already-done individual changes.

                                -Bill



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