[CRISP-TEAM] Interim version, not yet checked visually in Word...

[Bill Woodcock]

> On Jan 14, 2015, at 9:43 PM, Nurani Nimpuno <nurani at netnod.se> wrote:
> 
> Hi,
> 
> Thanks Michael and Bill for your great work.
> 
> I haven't yet had the time to check that all the correct text has been included. But as time is short, here are a few initial comments more editorial in nature.
> 
> However, I do raise one comment which is more than editorial.
> 
>> IV.A.   Description of operational requirements ...
>> A new agreement specifying IANA operation of the Internet Number Registries can be established well before the September 2015 transition target, as we propose to simply reconcile the contracting party with the policy authority, without changing service levels or reporting.
> 
> I believe that it should say that a new agreement "should" be established before the transition target. I realize this has implications, but I thought we had agreed on including language to the effect that this agreement should be in place before the transition. But we can discuss this.
> 
> I have made the changes directly in the document for easier review.

All excellent catches, all now incorporated.  Thank you.

                                -Bill




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