[CRISP-TEAM] Possible inconsinstency pointed out on IRP for Section III A2 and IIIA3

[Izumi Okutani]

On 2015/01/15 9:28, Alan Barrett wrote:
> On Thu, 15 Jan 2015, Craig Ng wrote:
>> How about we replace the existing text in III.A.3.ix with the following:
>>
>> -----
>> X.III.3.ix.  Intellectual Property Rights and Rights Over Data
>>
>> Principle:
>>
>> The RIR community must have free unlimited access to all intellectual 
>> property rights which are necessary for, or which relate to, the 
>> continuing provision of the IANA services. Such rights must also be 
>> available freely, without restriction, to any successor operator of 
>> the IANA services.
>>
>> The details and expectations of the RIR community on this issue are 
>> set out in III.A.2.
>> -----
> 
> That's good!  We should probably say "IANA Numbering Services", not just 
> "IANA services".
> 

+ 1 to Alan.

Additionally, replace "the RIR community" with the "Internet number
community." but that can be tweaked in Michael's edit I think.

Thank you Craig for drafting this!

Below is reflecting Alan's and my point.

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X.III.3.ix.  Intellectual Property Rights and Rights Over Data

Principle:

The Internet number community must have free unlimited access to all
intellectual property rights which are necessary for, or which relate
to, the continuing provision of the IANA services. Such rights must also
be available freely, without restriction, to any successor operator of
the IANA Numbering services.

The details and expectations of the RIR community on this issue are set
out in III.A.2.
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Izumi