[CRISP-TEAM] Constistent use of term for number community

Nurani Nimpuno nurani at netnod.se
Wed Jan 14 08:53:14 CET 2015


Hi,

We use a few different terms for the Internet number community in the document. In some places we use RIR community which is fine in my view. But where we talk about a number community, we should do so with a consistent term. 

I suggest we use "Internet number community" consistently. 
Please find my list below of language that would be good to make consistent.

Nurani

> I.A. 
> The IANA activities relevant to the number resource communities are

-> The IANA activities relevant to the Internet number resource communities are

> III.A.
> This proposal assumes that specific IANA customers (i.e. the numbers community, 

-> This proposal assumes that specific IANA customers (i.e. the Internet numbers community, 

> III.A.1. 
> ... the Internet numbering community believes that ICANN should remain ...

-> ... the Internet numbers community believes that ICANN should remain ...

> III.A.3
> The Internet numbering community proposes that a new contract be established 

-> The Internet numbers community proposes that a new contract be established 

> III.A.3
> ... IANA functions operator's accountability to the open, bottom-up numbers community.


-> ... IANA functions operator's accountability to the open, bottom-up numbers community.

> VI.A. 
> The number resources communities based their process for developing an IANA stewardship

-> The Internet numbers community based its process for developing an IANA stewardship

> VI.A.
> only the positive commitment of the numbering community to this process


-> only the positive commitment of the Internet numbers community to this process

> VI.G. 
> Team to develop a single Internet numbering community proposal

-> Team to develop a single Internet numbers community proposal

> VI.I. 
> The CRISP Team believes therefore that the current proposal fully reflects the consensus of the global numbering community.

-> The CRISP Team believes therefore that the current proposal fully reflects the consensus of the global Internet numbers community.



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