[CRISP-TEAM] CRISP TEAM - Proposal Draft 13012015 Call

[Alan Barrett]

On Tue, 13 Jan 2015, Nurani Nimpuno wrote:
>Two other comments:
>
>> Original text:
>> NTIA has no oversight role in policy-making ... and its 
>> transition out of its current role would have minimal effect on 
>> the policy-making framework.
>>
>> PW's change:
>> NTIA has no oversight role in policy-making ... and its 
>> transition out of its current role would have no effect on the 
>> existing policy-making framework.
>
> Changing "minimal effect" to "no effect" is more than merely 
> editorial. But I am comfortable with this change.

I also agree that "no effect" is accurate.

>> II.B.2.  If the policy sources identified in Section II.A are affected...
>>
>> Original text:
>> A decision by the NTIA to discontinue its stewardship ... would 
>> not have any significant impact on the continuity of Internet 
>> number-related IANA services currently provided by ICANN.
>>
>> PW's change:
>> A decision by the NTIA to discontinue its stewardship ... would 
>> have no impact on the continuity of IANA Numbering Services.
>
>I agree to remove the reference to ICANN.
> But I feel that "not have any significant impact" is more 
> correct than "no impact"

I agee with Nurani; I prefer "not have any significat impact"

--apb (Alan Barrett)