[CRISP-TEAM] Compilation of Sugested texts - issues discussed at the 11th call

[Izumi Okutani]

Michael and CRISP Team,


This is the suggested texst which we see support on the CRISP Team
mailing list on the three issues we discussed at the 11th call.

This is a complication of what has been shared by Andrei and myself. I
have not made any changes in sentence nor words.

Please provide your feedback, if you wish to make changes, before the
next call on 14th Jan, so we are clear on what to incorporate.

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1. III.A.3 (consultation with the community)

OLD:

It is expected that RIR staff will draft the specific language of this
agreement, and that the drafting process will be guided by the
principles listed below. References to relevant sections of the current
NTIA agreement are also noted, as it is expected the new agreement will
share many of the same contractual goals and mechanisms.

NEW:

It is expected that the RIRs, as the contractual party of this
agreement, will draft the specific language of this agreement. During
the drafting process the RIRs are expected to consult the RIR
communities.  The drafting process will be guided by the principles
listed below. References to relevant sections of the current NTIA
agreement are also noted, as it is expected the new agreement will share
many of the same contractual goals and mechanisms.


2. III.A.3. Service level agreement (Budget Review)

Add in "IANA Agreement Principles"

NEW:
xi. Contract Fee
The contract fee is based on costs incurred by the IANA operator in
providing the IANA numbering service.

3. III.A.4. Establishment of a Review Committee

Add in the last paragraph:

NEW:

 The selection of the Review Committee members should be conducted in an
 open, bottom up and inclusive manner, appropriate for each RIR
 region. There should be equal representation from each RIR region
 in constituting the Review Committee.
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Regards,
Izumi