[CRISP-TEAM] CRISP TEAM - Proposal Draft 13012015 Call

[Michael Abejuela]

Hello Everyone,

As always a pleasure speaking with you all on the call this morning (evening).  As requested, please find attached a redline and clean version of the draft that incorporates Alan’s and my edits which in turn was incorporating editorial feedback from the community.

Also included in this draft are Paul Wilson’s comments which were both editorial and substantive in nature.  If needed after taking a look at this version, I can back out Paul’s suggestions if necessary, just will need a bit of time.  This is the document from which Bill worked to clean up the formatting and do a thorough copy/edit pass, the product of which was shared earlier today.

I understand that there were questions regarding the nature of Bill’s updates and whether they were purely editorial and formatting edits or if any substantive edits to the text were also incorporated.  I have not reviewed Bill’s draft in that level of detail and defer to him to confirm this item.

Please let me know if you have any questions or have any issues with the attachments.  If you have any questions on the source of any of the changes tracked, please let me know and I would be happy to send the source comments/emails.I look forward to your comments and feedback.

Thanks,
-Michael


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