[CRISP-TEAM] Editorial suggestions

[Bill Woodcock]

Here’s the integrated document.  Note that this does _not_ attempt aesthetic page-breaks.  I’ll wait on that (and a final, more thorough, copyedit) until all of the substantive changes from the January 12 deadline are added.

                                -Bill



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