[CRISP-TEAM] Suggested Text - III.A.3. Service level agreement (Budget Review)

[Paul Rendek]

I support Andrei's language, clear and concise,  but lets use a
consistent name (if we agree) as Andrei mentioned. So the text could be:

"The contract fee is based on costs incurred by the IANA Numbering Services Operator in providing the IANA numbering service."

thanks,
Paul


On 1/13/15 11:00 AM, Nurani Nimpuno wrote:
> On 13 jan 2015, at 11:53, Andrei Robachevsky <robachevsky at isoc.org> wrote:
>
>> Hi Izumi,
>>
>> Izumi Okutani wrote on 13/01/15 05:18:
>> [...]
>>
>>> IANA Agreement Principles
>>> ----
>>> xi. Contract Fee
>>>
>>> Principle:
>>> Appropriate Fee for the contract, in delegating the IANA operation for
>>> the number resources function from the RIRs to the IANA operator, should
>>> be discussed between the two parties, based on the review of the current
>>> contract fee and the need for cost recovery.
>>>
>> I agree with the substance, but the sentence looks a bit too complex to
>> me. Can we simply say:
>>
>> "The contract fee is based on costs incurred by the IANA operator in
>> providing the IANA numbering service."
> This is clear to me. So I support Andrei's language. 
>
>> (Or whatever consistent name for this function we decide to use).
> Agreed.
> Nurani
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>> Andrei
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