[CRISP-TEAM] Suggested Text - III.A.3 (consultation with the community)

[Andrei Robachevsky]

Izumi Okutani wrote on 13/01/15 10:34:
> Thank you Andrei for drafing the suggested text which refers to opne
> consultation of the SLA.
> 
> Your suggested text looks good to me, and perhaps it would strengthen
> our rationale on why RIR staff will draft, if we could add something like:
> 
> It is expected that RIR staff will draft the specific language of this
> agreement *as the direct stakeholder of the number resources component
> of the IANA function*,
>

Thank you Izumi, this addition makes sense to me. Perhaps (also changing
"the RIR staff" to "the RIRs" for consistency with other principles):

It is expected that the RIRs, as the contractual party of this
agreement, will draft the specific language of this agreement,...

So the new version will read:

NEW:

It is expected that the RIRs, as the contractual party of this
agreement, will draft the specific language of this agreement. During
the drafting process the RIRs are expected to consult the RIR
communities.  The drafting process will be guided by the principles
listed below. References to relevant sections of the current NTIA
agreement are also noted, as it is expected the new agreement will share
many of the same contractual goals and mechanisms.


Thanks,

Andrei


> (the part marked in * suggested to be added)
> 
> It doesn't have to be worded in the way I suggested but was wondering if
> it's worth explaining why RIRs are responsible, which seems like the
> source of confusion for some.
> 
> What are your thoughts?
> 
> Izumi
> 
> On 2015/01/13 18:18, Andrei Robachevsky wrote:
>> Hi,
>>
>> Here is a suggested addition to the text in order to reflect the
>> expectation of the community that the RIRs will consult the community
>> when developing the SLAs. We believe that the concerns raised by people
>> on the ianaxfer related to some specific details of dispute resolution
>> and applicable law come from the fear that this is the last opportunity
>> for the community to voice their opinion. The additional statement is
>> aimed to assure this is not the case.
>>
>> OLD:
>>
>> It is expected that RIR staff will draft the specific language of this
>> agreement, and that the drafting process will be guided by the
>> principles listed below. References to relevant sections of the current
>> NTIA agreement are also noted, as it is expected the new agreement will
>> share many of the same contractual goals and mechanisms.
>>
>> NEW:
>>
>> It is expected that RIR staff will draft the specific language of this
>> agreement. During the drafting process RIR staff is expected to consult
>> the RIR communities.  The drafting process will be guided by the
>> principles listed below. References to relevant sections of the current
>> NTIA agreement are also noted, as it is expected the new agreement will
>> share many of the same contractual goals and mechanisms.
>>
>>
>> Your feedback is welcome,
>>
>> Regards,
>>
>> Andrei
>>
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