[CRISP-TEAM] [NRO-IANAXFER] Thanks, and comments on the second draft proposal

[Nurani Nimpuno]

On 13 jan 2015, at 11:41, Izumi Okutani <izumi at nic.ad.jp> wrote:

> As one more possible point which may be straight forward.
> 
> A.2.
> It is the preference of the RIR communities that all relevant parties
> acknowledge that fact as part of the transition.
> 
> Comment from PW:
> "It is not clear which fact is referred to here."
> 
> This looks to me like a part which simply needs clarification in the
> language from the previous sentence.

Yes true, agree. To me it's quite clear, but maybe to to everyone. 
I'm fine with making this clearer.

Nurani


> Regards,
> Izumi