[CRISP-TEAM] Suggested Text - III.A.3 (consultation with the community)

[Izumi Okutani]

Thank you Andrei for drafing the suggested text which refers to opne
consultation of the SLA.

Your suggested text looks good to me, and perhaps it would strengthen
our rationale on why RIR staff will draft, if we could add something like:

It is expected that RIR staff will draft the specific language of this
agreement *as the direct stakeholder of the number resources component
of the IANA function*,

(the part marked in * suggested to be added)

It doesn't have to be worded in the way I suggested but was wondering if
it's worth explaining why RIRs are responsible, which seems like the
source of confusion for some.

What are your thoughts?

Izumi

On 2015/01/13 18:18, Andrei Robachevsky wrote:
> Hi,
> 
> Here is a suggested addition to the text in order to reflect the
> expectation of the community that the RIRs will consult the community
> when developing the SLAs. We believe that the concerns raised by people
> on the ianaxfer related to some specific details of dispute resolution
> and applicable law come from the fear that this is the last opportunity
> for the community to voice their opinion. The additional statement is
> aimed to assure this is not the case.
> 
> OLD:
> 
> It is expected that RIR staff will draft the specific language of this
> agreement, and that the drafting process will be guided by the
> principles listed below. References to relevant sections of the current
> NTIA agreement are also noted, as it is expected the new agreement will
> share many of the same contractual goals and mechanisms.
> 
> NEW:
> 
> It is expected that RIR staff will draft the specific language of this
> agreement. During the drafting process RIR staff is expected to consult
> the RIR communities.  The drafting process will be guided by the
> principles listed below. References to relevant sections of the current
> NTIA agreement are also noted, as it is expected the new agreement will
> share many of the same contractual goals and mechanisms.
> 
> 
> Your feedback is welcome,
> 
> Regards,
> 
> Andrei
> 
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