[CRISP-TEAM] Editorial suggestions
izumi at nic.ad.jp
Mon Jan 12 17:33:40 CET 2015
I must add from Andres as well, under the thread "Last version of the
proposal with the table of version control".
On 2015/01/13 1:32, Izumi Okutani wrote:
> Thank you Michael, Alan and Bill.
> To to share the list of people who have made editorical suggestions,
> based on my memory.
> on CRISP ML
> - Alan Barett, Bill Woodcock, Mwendwa Kivuva, Niall(through Nurani),
> Pindar Wong (through Izumi)
> - myself (Izumi Okutani): See word attachment for the specific changes
> "A few formating changes to Section III"
> on IANAXFER list
> - Wilfred Woeber
> - Paul Wilson
> On 2015/01/13 1:22, Michael Abejuela wrote:
>> Thank you Alan and Bill for working with me on this. In response to your
>> e-mail Alan, please see below:
>> (1) Yes you are correct, that is the document and the most recent
>> one I
>> sent to you I apologize had the same file name but the only change was
>> metadata change.
>> (2) Bill, I know you are out of pocket with the Board meeting and
>> immediately afterwards. Alan, if you provide me your edits with track
>> changes, I can work on combining the edits into a master document. Then
>> you can get some much needed and deserved rest!
>> (3) I do have a prior commitment that will take me offline from
>> 22:00 UTC
>> to 02:00 UTC but can combine the edits after that. I anticipate being
>> able to complete the combination by 03:00 UTC.
>> (4) I can then circulate to both of Alan and Bill, and Bill, if you
>> can do
>> a ���copyedit��� (and any other editorial changes we may have missed)
>> that would be great.
>> (5) To keep consistent with the process that has been in place,
>> Bill, once
>> you have done your copyedit pass, could you send to me and Alan and
>> then I
>> will finalize with clean and redline versions as well as various formats
>> for both posting on the IANAXFER list and providing to German for website
>> I agree, we do need two copyedit rounds (1) editorial and (2) substantive
>> as this is what was agreed on the call today. Have I missed anything and
>> does this work for everyone?
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