[CRISP-TEAM] A few formating changes to Section III
apb at cequrux.com
Mon Jan 12 12:02:30 CET 2015
On Fri, 09 Jan 2015, Izumi Okutani wrote:
>Proposed changes: (See attached word file for redline)
> 1. Move the paragraph which describes how the proposal is positioned
> with other function, under III A. from III A3
> - It looks like general principles for all elements not just SLA
> - Slims SLA part with the core of what it proposes
> 2. Move the sentence "The Internet numbering community proposes that a
> new contract be established between the IANA functions operator and
> the five RIRs."
> - Easier to capture the proposal by describing what we propose in
> early paragraph
> 3. Lower indent for "IANA Agreement Principles" part
> - To Highlight the overview of SLA proposed element
> - Easier to keep in mind about 4 proposed elements without getting
> lost into details of SLA points.
I support moving the text as proposed in 1 and 2 above.
I don't really understand what the document will look like after
the indentation change proposed in 3 above, but I support the
ideas that motivated that suggestion.
--apb (Alan Barrett)
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