[CRISP-TEAM] Document status inside the document
rendek at ripe.net
Sun Jan 11 11:38:28 CET 2015
Yes, this looks good to me.
On 1/11/15 7:39 AM, Alan Barrett wrote:
> I suggest adding a paragraph of document status inside the document,
> in between the heading "Draft Response to the Internet Coordination
> Group Request for Proposals on IANA from the RIR community" and the
> fiste heading "1. Proposal Type". It could say who wrote the document,
> and which version this is.
> I note that the ICG RFP uses number 0, not 1, in the heading "0.
> Proposal type", and I think we should do the same.
> I also think that the title would be better is we moved "from the RIR
> community" closer to the beginning.
> So, I suggest that the top of our document should say something like
> Draft Response from the RIR community
> to the Internet Coordination Group Request for Proposals on IANA
> This document is a response from the Internet addressing community
> to the ICG Request for Proposals. It was prepared by the CRISP Team,
> which was established by the five Regional Internet Registries
> (RIRs) specifically for the purpose of producing this document.
> This is the second draft, published on 8 January 2015.
> 0. Proposal type
> --apb (Alan Barrett)
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